My name is Charlie. Right now, I'm happy and sad about my life. I just started high school and I
don't like it. I don't have friends and no one really talks to me. It's hard to start school because my
aunt died. I guess I'm pretty emotional about it. My aunt and I were close. My life changed
because I felt alone when she died.
During a football game I decided to sit next to Sam and Patrick. I met Sam before at counseling and I knew Patrick because he was in my shop class. They call him "nothing" because students used to call him Patty and he got annoyed when they kept on calling him that. So one day, Patrick said, "Listen, you either call me Patrick, or you call me nothing." After since that people call him that. I usually don't go to football games because I don't understand the concept of it. My dad gets annoyed by me because when we watch football I ask too many questions.
After the game was over Sam invited me to go to a party and I said yes. I have never been to a party before. There was a party at my house before that my brother decided to throw. He decided to do then because my parents were not going to be home for a week. My experience was weird and confusing. I didn't know what was going on and I stayed in my room the whole time. People would once in a while walk in my room and they would just see me and leave.
During a football game I decided to sit next to Sam and Patrick. I met Sam before at counseling and I knew Patrick because he was in my shop class. They call him "nothing" because students used to call him Patty and he got annoyed when they kept on calling him that. So one day, Patrick said, "Listen, you either call me Patrick, or you call me nothing." After since that people call him that. I usually don't go to football games because I don't understand the concept of it. My dad gets annoyed by me because when we watch football I ask too many questions.
After the game was over Sam invited me to go to a party and I said yes. I have never been to a party before. There was a party at my house before that my brother decided to throw. He decided to do then because my parents were not going to be home for a week. My experience was weird and confusing. I didn't know what was going on and I stayed in my room the whole time. People would once in a while walk in my room and they would just see me and leave.
I really like the way you explained the way she was feeling and how it's hard to lose someone that your really close to. It seems like a really good book, something that I would like to read. It seems like a very emotional book, with lots of teenage drama. Good job AIleen.
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DeleteYou did a good job on the details. I liked the way you described how he was feeling.
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DeleteI'm a bit confused. Is the party that Sam invited Charlie to the same party that his brother is throwing, or is it different? You told us a lot about Charlie, but I'd like to know how it is all put together to make him who he is. It's interesting that you say he's both happy and sad about his life; I think people don't always realize that you can be both happy and sad at the same time.
ReplyDeleteIt's the party that his brother threw.
DeleteI I like the way way you put this together. Seems like you really got into the book and enjoyed it. You put very good detail on what's going on so far and how her life is.
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