My name's Ray Johnston. I'm 15 years old and I'm in love. Ruby. She's what makes my day, the reason I want to go to school, and the reason I smile. Ruby's kisses make me feel loved and warm inside like no one else has. Every time I see her it's like the whole world's in front of me, but there's only one problem: she moved away to California to move in with her dad, the famous movie star Whip Logan. I ask myself everyday why did she have to move If she doesn't even like her father? Ruby has been through so much besides the fact that her father missed out 15 years of his daughter's life and she's been kidnapped and taken on a plane to California.
I practically know everything about Ruby. Her mother died and her dad became super rich and famous and everybody wanted to meet him expect for his daughter. Ruby once told me she doesn't want to see her father and that she doesn't love him also that she thinks he doesn't even think about her. I know somewhere deep down inside her heart she wants to see him and that she still has a little bit of love for him, but since she did move to California I guess her father did think about her.
Ever since Ruby left it's hard for me to sleep at night knowing she's gone and I most likely won't see her again because her aunt is going on a cruise for like 6 months. Who would she stay with? Her best friend Lizzie? With me? I don't care who she stays with as long as she is safe and I get to see the love of my life again. We send each other emails to keep in touch and I think she called me once but I wasn't home at that time. My brother told me but I just never had the time to call back. I need to tell Ruby all kinds of stories that happened around school without her and I want to know what's going on at her new school. What's it like? Now that she's gone Amber she tries to flirt with me in social studies because she knows Ruby's gone. She may be gone but she will be in my heart for all eternity.
I'm lovin the post it's nice and long and it seems that you really got into it. Lots of details and you didn't give away the ending good job.
ReplyDeleteNice job mike
DeleteGood post. You went into a lot of detail. U did a good job doing this from the characters point of view.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like you got really into the book. They are some sentence that keep saying "and" a lot. It sounds like an interesting book, but it all also have a lot drama.
ReplyDeleteI like how you gave a lot of detail to the bookit seems like you really got into it.
ReplyDeleteYou did a very good job in explaining the characters feels and thoughts. Also I like the way you went into it and gave it a lot of emotion to it. You can tell that you went in to it and you enjoyed the book. This book is a very good book, and exciting book. I have read this book in the past and yes it's something that you would sit and just want to read and not stop. Good job
ReplyDeleteI really get a good idea of how much Ray likes Ruby! I don't understand why Ray can't find the time to call her back if he really loves her and can't wait to speak to her. Is Ruby making a plan to move back? I was a little confused about your explanation in this part. I wonder if Ruby will end up liking her new life or if she will wish that she could go back to her old one.
ReplyDeleteI haven't got so far in the book to know if Ruby ends up moving back. Ray doesn't explain why he hasn't had the time to call Ruby back.
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